the day they met ,was unpretentious,
but soon then everything was not so obvious.
On a sunny bright December morning, he came to meet her,with her parents no where to be found.
they were overwhelm, yet never utter a word.
It was few days ago that they were lying on the sword.
"now that we could meet often,our lives would be much happier" he said to this she replied with a gentle smile.Her heart was thumping loudly as she moved her feet closer to him and gave a sweet peck on his cheeks, she motioned her head forward to touch his lips with hers.
The fire that they had been breathing ignited the way they had hoped.
flowers came blazing down,
the odor was wonderful , it made their life as roses in the pool..
" lie with me" she whispered in his ears.
The restlessness and upheaval within their hearts had settled down and they kept staring at each other....
She decided "I would stay up all night and hold his gaze with mine for I do not have the courage to let him go this night..
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Hi Anurag..
Welcome to Room for Romance..
This is so romantic.. I loved your tale.. "Live with me", she whispered in my ears.. So so so romantic..
Thanks for the support by linking in..
--Someone Is Special--
Your story just peeked into my past and with it went I.
Lovely post.
some great lines in there...the courage to let him go...i like the structure as well...
i would rethink the roses line and ;et us experience it as opposed to tell it to us...
the lines soo profoundly immersed in romance and passion!
loved this piece!
@chocolate girl -
thanks dear. ^-^
@ S.I.S -
its my pleasure to be part of such rooms. :)
@Zave -
dude, I very well know what was in your mind.
apparently, we both have traveled in the same boat, the only difference being you had sailed a lot earlier.
:)
@ Brian -
welcome to my blog sir.
I sincerely appreciate your comments.
yes, the "roses" part was looking something odd to me as well,still I preferred to use it as nothing was coming (in my mind) as replacement.
@aparna-
I am glad that you liked it.
thanks for the comments. :)
Awesome. So very romantic. Just one observation..
Roses in the pool.....doesnt sound that fitting. :-)
cute one!
loved reading it.
anurag!!! i have been following ur blogs very sincerely dis month..n its so damn romantic!! keep writing..u r awesome..
Loved it :)
@ Insignia
oh, that rose was a bit unfitting in the lines. still I am glad you liked the tale.
@redchutni
thanks for the consideration.I was in constant hope of getting your feed back.
hope, I would continue gathering your attention in days to follow.
@zainab
I am you liked it. :)
jingle
thanks. :)
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