Wednesday, September 29, 2010

the incomplete story.(4)

Aryan and Udita were in love with each other, Love as seen in plays, as pure and intense as it ever could be.Both of them wanted to get married one day, nothing could ever stop them from loving each other.
But fate had something else planned for them. What made them drift apart ? will the love between them survive? will they ever meet again? or would  just  move on in their lives ??
witness their love blossom into a flower and then fade away like crushed leaves.....


continues from going away...


                                                      far apart
away from the cries and sorrow of his world,she was on a much propitous ride.
"finally life has been worth living, thanks god." was her facebook status, after she parted herself away from the person whom she called her love, 9 months ago.
"words hardly matter and people tend to change in matter of days.I have had enough of sorrows and just can't afford more.Life is a book of chapters,as we moves forward one need to close the previous ones, not to be opened again" she reflected these words to herself, as the plane took off from Netaji Subhas Chandra Bose International airport.
Life has been generous to her, new college ,new friends, no promises to be kept,no relation to be handled.
She desperately wanted to make this come off.A series of attempts to change the decision was deliberately discarded by her.
                                              nothing matters to me you know,
                                              I am very well happy without you
                                              thats for sure.


his pleadings were incorrigible for her now.
"I am fed up of understanding you,no matter what you do now I will forever regret my years with you.It was such a unwise decision to come to you." she conveyed this in a discordant tone ever used by her.


Everything in her life was shaping like never before and she welcomed every joy with open arms.Relation was the last thing she wanted in her life now.
She had changed from top to bottom,her eyes spoke so much , hair much longer with slightest touch of brown in it.A look on which she was proud of and to this she got a fair bit of attention among the male species. 
                     *                          *                               *                   *
On the other side Aryan was in pain, every attempt to bring his life back on track was proving to be futile..slowly but surely, he was on the verge of loosing a hard fought battle.He had decided whatever happens to him now he would never let that girl know,for that he disconnected himself from every possible common source.
Same was the thoughts of Udita ,
because of their ego their love got hanged in between for which one was suffering and for other one ?? lets say the days were about to start...



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Anonymous said...

i can see an author is blossoming some where inside you.

Insignia said...

You have a strong story base. Good start. I just have a suggestion if you dont mind. Improve on narration and language a bit :-) you will make a good story teller :-)

Again, please ignore my suggestions if you think otherwise.

Anangkr said...

Vijay.
Author ??? Its nice of you to think this. Thanks anyway,you have been a good supporter.

Anangkr said...

Oh,i was waiting for this comment.
I know my language needs a lot of correction and i am trying my best always. But do excuse me as i am just a kid to blog-o-sphere.
Thanks for the suggestion and i look forward for more support. :-)

Shriti said...

nice one ^_^

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