Sunday, August 8, 2010

the walk.

                                                  The decision is stern,
                                                  I will never look back
                                                  this I make you confirm.

With this she walked out of his life and shook  off all her worries.All his attempt to make her understand his love,to make her change her mind were drained away.

                                                      you will walk with your life,
                                                      the worries and concerns left behind.

                                                      the imprints of your love,
                                                      will burn me inside
                                                      till the water washes it from either side.

He tried to cope up with the loss he had suffered ,but everything around brought more and more pain to him.
Walking on the beach alone,he recalled  the first walk they took together [on th beach itself].....
Now, he could see only his footprints which was once accompanied by someone else.
The single steps revealed the loneliness in his life.


                                                The enchanting beauty around appears lifeless,
                                                 the only thing that remains
                                                 is the love left behind on the mattress.  








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4 people noticed.:

Arshat Chaudhary said...

Wow! Lovely...
The use of words.. the flow.. loved it.. every word :)

Anangkr said...

@Arshat - I am glad that you liked it, sir.
Thanks for the visit. :)

The Write Girl said...

I love the imagery in this piece and the last lines are powerful.

Nimue said...

interesting way of telling a tale :)

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